Kukho intetho ethi umhlobo wokwenene unaphakade, kwaye unokufumana eyona mibongo imnandi yomhlobo osenyongweni obaluleke kakhulu. Imibongo ingavakalisa iimvakalelo ngendlela eyodwa, ke yabelana ngenkathalo yakho okanye uxabiso lwakho ngemibongo kunye nomhlobo wakho osenyongweni.
Imibongo emnandi yabahlobo abagqwesileyo
Imibongo emnandi kubahlobo abasenyongweni inokuba neendlela ezahlukeneyo. Banokuthetha ngamandla okanye isimilo somhlobo wakho, babonise uxabiso okanye umbulelo ngobuhlobo enabelana ngabo bobabini, okanye bavuse ixesha okanye isiganeko esithile ebomini benu. Akukho ndlela iphosakeleyo yokubonisa ubuhlobo ngokusebenzisa imibongo. Sebenzisa le mibongo yabahlobo abalungileyo ukubonisa iimvakalelo zakho, okanye njengemizekelo yokuza neevesi zakho.
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Umhlobo Wenene
Igxalaba lam lokulila
Iqabane lam ebubini
Lowo uhlala ekhona.
Ndixelela inyani
Isabelo sam sephupha
Lowo uhlala emamela.
Umnini wam oyimfihlo
Umntu endimthandayo endihleka naye
Oyaziyo xa kungekho mazwi.
Umhlobo wam oyinyaniso
Iliwa lam ukubala
Lowo ndihlala ndifuna ecaleni kwam.
Nguwe lowo -
Umngani wam ogqibelele.
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Ubukho
Xa ndandisisithunzi nje sam
Ubukho
Xa intliziyo yam yayaphukile
Ubukho.
Xa ndandigqabhuka luvuyo
Ubukho
Xa ndenza iimpazamo
Ubukho.
Xa ndingafuni ukumamela
Ubukho
Xa ndifuna umhlobo
Ubukho.
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Abahlobo abagqwesileyo kunye
Kuzo zonke phezulu
kwaye yonke phantsi
Wonke umzuzu wolonwabo
nazo zonke izigqibo ezimbi
Awuzange ushiye icala lam.
Ngayo yonke intsini
nako konke ukungaqiniseki
Wonke umzuzu wokungazithembi
kwaye ngalo lonke ixesha ndiziva ndisoyika
Bendisazi ukuba uzakuba ecaleni kwam.
Ndiyathemba ukuba uyazi
Ngayo yonke le nto buzisa obu bomi
Yonke intaba yovuyo
nazo zonke iintlambo
Ndiza kuhlala ndihamba nawe.
Ngokudibeneyo, abahlobo abasenyongweni banokwenza ngayo nantoni na.
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Ubambelele
Undincedile
ukukholelwa kum
Uhlale kwikona yam
xa ndifuna umntu kakhulu
Ubambelele
Xa omnye umntu ebenokuyekela.
Enkosi ngokuba ngumhlobo wam osenyongweni.
Ngaba abafazi abakhulelweyo banokuthatha i-tylenol pm
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Nguwuphi Oyena Mhlobo Usenyongweni?
Nguwuphi umhlobo osenyongweni?
Akunzima ukuyibona.
Ngoyena ukwaziyo ngaphezu kwako konke
kwaye uyakholelwa kuwe.
Nguye ohlala ethembekile
Naxa kubuhlungu
Kodwa uthando lwabo kunye nokwangana kuhlala kuhlala kukhona
Nditsho kokubi kakhulu.
Umhlobo osenyongweni akafezekanga
Isibhakabhaka asizukuhlala siluhlaza okwesibhakabhaka
Kodwa xa ninamathela kunye
Akukho nto aninakuyenza nina nobabini.
Yintombazana eyabelana ngamathemba namaphupha akhe
kwaye umamele ezakho, nazo
Nokuba bathini abanye,
Uthembekile kwaye unyanisile.
Umhlobo wokwenene akadingi
Ukuthanda okanye ubuxoki
Kuba kunye ungowesibini esigqibeleleyo
kwaye une-bond engayi kuqhawuka.
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Umhlobo osenyongweni
Intliziyo enkulu
Engaqhelekanga
Ukuzincama
Kucinga
Uthembekile
Ukuqinisekisa kwakhona
Kuyakhuthaza
Kuyakhuthaza
Noble
Kunikezelwa
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Oyena Mhlobo ubalaseleyo (Haiku)
Intliziyo ekhaliphileyo nethembekileyo
Soloko ubeka abanye kuqala
Umhle kwaye womelele.
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Unethamsanqa kubuhlobo (Limerick)
Ngethamsanqa ndikunye nomhlobo oyinyani
Ngubani ondivuyisa xa ndiluhlaza.
Ukhuthaza iintsuku
Ibonisa ubuhlobo ngeendlela ezininzi
Into endizoyenza ngaphandle kwakhe andinalo nofifi.
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Iisonethi Malunga nabahlobo
Uninzi lwabantu lufunde imibongo kaShakespeare, kodwa ubusazi ukuba uninzi lweenkondlo zakhe ngobuhlobo zibizwa ngokuba ziisonethi? I-sonnet yimiqolo engama-14 ebongozayo ebhaliweyo yile ibizwa ngokuba yi 'iambic pentameter.' Oko kuthetha ukuba umgca ngamnye wemibongo ziimpawu ezilishumi ezinamagama agxininisiweyo kunye noxinzelelo. Imibongo kaShakespearean, njengoShakespeare Ubuhlobo Sonnet , yenzelwe ukuba ifundwe ngokuvakalayo njengoko inohlobo lomculo wesingqisho.
Abangani ngonaphakade
Intliziyo yakho, yeyona inamandla, inyanisileyo kuzo zonke
Ukuzaliswa kukunyaniseka, nenkuthazo
Uncumo, ukukhanya, ilanga; kunye nokuhleka rhoqo
Ukuhamba, ngokukhawuleza, njengempompo engapheliyo.
Kwakuhlala kukuwe endinokukubiza
Xa ndisoyika, okanye xa kubini intliziyo yam yayiqeshiwe
Kumaxesha anzima, amandla akho ebesabolekisiwe
Njengomhlobo wam osenyongweni, zange wandenza ndaziva ndimncinci.
Amagama awanakubamba undoqo wakho
Yenzelwe ubukhulu, inkwenkwezi ekhanyayo ekhanyayo
Ndinombulelo ngobuhlobo endinabo ngokwenene.
Naphi na apho ubomi buya khona, akukaze kube kude kakhulu
Ukophula amaqhina obuhlobo njengawethu amabini
Abahlobo abasenyongweni ngonaphakade kwaye sihlala sikho njalo.
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( Abangani ngonaphakade ilandela ipateni yeshakespearean sonnet ye-abab-cdcd-efef-gg.)
Abahlobo Abakhulu Kule minyaka
Ukuqala kwethu ukudibana kwaye sibancinci kakhulu sasibabini
Ubomi babuyinto yonke yokuhlekisa kwaye kwakungekho xhala, akukho.
Ubuhlobo babulula kwaye ihlabathi litsha,
Ezingapheliyo bezizele iintsuku zizele luvuyo, kumnandi.
Ukukhula, ukukhula kwakuqalisile,
Iindlela ngamanye amaxesha zinamatye; Ubomi obuncinci buzaliswe ngokulula
Nangona kunjalo ndandingeyedwa kwizaqhwithi okanye elangeni
Ubuhlobo bakho, apho, njengomoya opholileyo ofudumeleyo.
Imiqobo, ubomi njengolwandle oluqinisekileyo,
Kwakuhlala kuzolile, kutyebile, kwaye kukhanya ngakumbi
Unam ecaleni kwam, unjengomthunzi wemithi eqinileyo
Intliziyo yakho enothando, iqinile, yenza ubomi buqaqambe.
Kucacile, naphina apho ubomi busithathe khona
Ngobuhlobo bakho bokwenyani ndinokuhlala ndithembele.
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( Abahlobo Abakhulu Kule minyaka ilandela iphethini yesonnet yeSpenserian ye-abab-bcbc-cdcd-ee.)
Ubuhlobo obungafaniyo nobunye
Umhlobo wokwenene nothembekileyo kunzima ukufumana
Ngamanye amaxesha kufunyanwa kwindawo yokugqibela okrokrelwayo.
Ubuhlobo buyadubula; zimbini zohlobo,
Izibophelelo ezinamandla zikhula kwaye ziqala ukusebenza.
Njengamabhabhathane abhabha phezulu
Akukho ndawo yokumisa kuhambo oluthathwa ngabahlobo bokwenene.
Ukuphakanyisana phakathi kodaka
Ikamva eliqaqambileyo nelikhanyayo baya kuyenza.
Iiseti ezimbini zamehlo ziyaqhekeka kwaye zithambekele, zisazi,
Isiqingatha soncumo siguqukile kwaye silungele nantoni na.
Ukucwangcisa, ubuso buya kude kwaye buqaqambile
Iimpawu zokuzonwabisa; luza ntoni usuku?
Isibini esimiselwe ubuhlobo, esenziwe ngekamva,
Ikamva lemiphefumlo emibini enomtshato lilindile.
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( Ubuhlobo obungafaniyo nobunye Ilandela iphethini yesonnet yePetrarchan ye-abba-abba-cdc-dcd.)
Bhala eyakho imibongo
Imibongo ineendlela ezininzi, ukusukahaikukwiisonethi, kwaye kuyonwabisa ukufunda nganye nganye. Zamaukubhala eyakho imibongonjengesipho kumhlobo wakho osenyongweni ngonaphakade. Ukuza nemibongo yomhlobo wakho osenyongweni:
- Cinga ukusebenzisaivesi yasimahla- oku akukho kuthintelwa ngokusesikweni kwezinye iintlobo zemibongo (njengamonethi) ukuze ukwazi ukugxila ekufikeleleni entliziyweni yeemvakalelo zakho.
- Zama ukusebenzisa amagama achazayo kunye nemifanekiso kangangoko kunokwenzeka. Sebenzisa ulwimi lokomfuziselo, njengezifaniso kunye nezafobe, kunokuba namandla kakhulu.
- Vala amehlo akho kwaye ucinge ixesha elikhethekileyo lokwabelana nomhlobo wakho osenyongweni. Vumela oku kukukhokele imibongo yakho.
- Imibongo ayifuni ukuba nesingqisho. Ukuba ujonge nje ukwenza umbongo omfutshane ukongeza ekhadini okanye kwisipho, nangona kunjalo, isingqisho sinokukunceda ukuba uze nombongo olula kwaye mhle.
- Ngaba uziva unamathele? Zama ukusebenzisaizibongo zihambaokanye aInkqubo yokubhala imibongoukukunceda.
Imibongo emnandi ngakumbi yabahlobo
Zininzi iindidi zemibongo njengoko uphonononga imibongo ngobuhlobo le mibongo ikunceda ukuba uveze ezakho iimvakalelo. Ukusuka kwiiklasikhi ezinkulu ezinje ngoShakespeare kubabhali abahlala bengaziwa, eyona mibongo imnandi yomhlobo osenyongweni ininzi. Qwalasela oku kulandelayo kwimibongo ongayikhetha:
- Abahlobo abasenyongweni naphakade -Ukuhlala ixesha elide kubuhlobo bakho yinto efanelekileyo kumbongo. Fumana izimvo apha.
- Abahlobo kunye nodade-Ukuba unodade ngegazi, ngudade wakho, okanye uqwalasele umhlobo wakho osenyongweni njengodade wentliziyo, le mibongo imnandi inokunika inkuthazo eluncedo.
- Imibongo yolutsha- Ukusuka kuxolelo kubuhlobo bokwenene, le mibongo inemixholo emininzi ekufuneka uyijongile.
- Imibongo yomtshakazi-Abafazi abatshakazi baphakathi kwabahlobo abasenyongweni bentombazana. Le mibongo inokukunceda ukukunika izimvo zokubulela abahlobo bakho ngemibongo, nokuba awutshatanga.
- Isibongo sothando losapho-Mhlawumbi unelungu losapho elikwangumhlobo omkhulu. Khuthazwa yile mibongo yosapho.
- Imibongo yomtshana- Ngaba unayo umtshana wakho ukuba umhlobo osenyongweni? Mhlawumbi enye yale mibongo iya kulunga ityala.
Abahlobo ngonaphakade
Abahlobo abalungileyo bakhetha omnye nomnye ngesizathu. Nokuba ufana neqabane lomphefumlo, ukuchasana ngokupheleleyo, okanye uhlala ucaphula omnye nomnye, xa ufumana umhlobo wakho osenyongweni, uhlala unomhlobo wobomi bakho bonke.
